persuasive

 Tuesday 18 August 2020 

Dear mum 

Can I please have a puppy? 

Because I am lonely on the weekend, I will take care of the dog and it will not cost you anything because I  will use my paper run money to get the dog food.

I am lonely on the weekend    

Every weekend most of my friends are out and some don't answer you back.  

I will care for the dog and will take the dog for a walk and feed the dog

and pick up the dog poo and play with the dog.

I will use my paper run money to get the dog food and toys so the dog doesn't get hungry and bored without dog toys.

So Mum can I please get a puppy to be my friend. I will care for it and  pay for it. 

By Lee 

new playground

 Dear Mrs Healey

I Believe that Oamaru Intermediate school Should build a  playground  to have more things to do at  break time and to help build Student fitness and some year 7 Miss there old school playground. 

  Firstly, having a playground will make more things to do at break time and students have fun at break time. 

 Secondly the playground will  help the students strengthen and make them more Active at lunch time.

 Thirdly the years 7  miss their old school playground and it is hard moving  from  school  with a playground  and  school without  a playground.